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I like it :D

THERE IS NO WAY THAT MAN IS STRAIGHT. Anyways I loved the game :)

this game made me brainstorm with hundreds of theories, like maybe the bus wasnt really real and it was a psychological view into Nao's mind, maybe the entity was his desire to push people away so nobody abandons him, but the ending made me rethink everything lol! great game

The ending was wild!

it may be the best visual novel I have ever played after doki doki doki, art style and so on, you can develop this game further and put it on steame or you can develop it by receiving donations on kickstarter, if you personally start a kickstarter project, I will not hesitate to donate to you because you have done an extremely nice job. 

Gets so so many style points for the textures on the environments. I like yao's silly walk cycle too.

damn, this game is too good for my computer, at some point it became slow and I couldn't even go to the menu. I think it ended great, it's a pity that I'm probably not destined to see the ending

EACH TIME THAT LIGHT NOISE (WITH THE BUZZING THING) WENT OFF I JUMPED IM SO DUMB 

anyways

(not gonna write the actual ending because i'm too lazy to do the spoiler stuff so)

the ending had me yelling and just honestly 

my jaw dropped i was losing my mind

I LOVE THIS GAME SM

Awesome game thank u for making it ^^ I had no idea u could even make something like this on MV like that kind of 3d thing but its very pretty..! got quite compelled by the characters too, great job <3

Game looks great, really interesing, beautiful artwork. Unfortunately it got impossibly laggy within a few minutes. I have a new gaming PC, just a few months old.

ahh this was so cool!

aaaAAAAAAAAHHH so good!!!! Also i love love love the art direction it looks so nice!!!!!!!

Just.... Wow

I love the visual and the graphics also amazing but my laptop couldn't handle it pretty well that makes the game so lagging :""( I'll try playing this game on another laptop later :D hopefully I can play this game well :D

Why, why isn't this in Spanish?!?

This game was amazing, easy to download and really fun, compelling story. 9/10

im sure its an amazing game just like the rest of yours but my laptop was not having it with this one for some reason :'(

my peepoo laptop could not take it :( whats your recommended specs?

Holy shit, I totally didn't expect that ending. Honestly I was so sucked in with the atmosphere you presented and the stillness of the entire game, I was so focused on being prepared for a jumpscare that I was blindsided at the ending. You really played well with our assumptions and understanding of the yandere trope, and you made the characters really well as in they acted the "role" we automatically assign them with. Which made the ending so much more impactful. SPOILERS BELOW!

When Siren was introduced, I genuinely thought he was the yandere, but it stopped as we kept progressing through the game and as we learned more about Siren, he felt so much normal and kind. I adored chatting with him and how it feels like he's like a spark of sunshine in this gloomy world (I love how the bus represents what I think Nao sees the world) and not only that, but the way Siren consistently gives effort to be with Nao even as a friend really touched me and makes me, in some ways, understand why Nao had to leave or else he would commit something far worse. Maybe even dull down Siren before he began to fully bloom into himself. Now, I'm going to go with a theory about Nao because good lord, that ending and the 180 of his personality hit me hard!

I'm not even sure if Nao is human or if he is a human host for a much darker entity. It seems as though he was human first before something attached to him and he just had to accept it as part of him. The entity itself seems to be some sort of dream like demon (I'm using this term very loosely) or that it can manipulate its prey's sense of reality and warp it (given the state of the bus). The both of them may have found a home in the forest (as evident in the greenery in the bus and the tree branches that flash through the screen) and could explain why Nao himself doesn't own a computer and a rather old phone. The reason why he could even be in net security is either he lied since Siren mentioned he was smart or that he uses his job as a means to spread the entity throughout the population as a sort of evil chain mail thing. At least, that's what I think it is.

What intrigues me is how Nao was able to play as this skittish person, but maybe he wasn't "acting". Maybe that's genuinely how he acts in front of other people, especially to those he cares about (Siren), but towards the entity he's more bold and authoritative, as if he knows he is the gateway the entity needs to cross between its reality and this reality which is why Nao is able to boss the entity than possible.

I just really loved how I was so blindsided towards Nao's true nature, he played it really well, able to earn sympathy from not only me but to Siren who, while sadly he said the "right" words as a friend, effectively doomed him and Sheila due to Nao's jealous/envious rage.

The atmosphere was so well done, I really love it! I'm just glad I was able to play one of your scary games without being a wuss because having to move around absolutely terrifies me ahahahah!

ngl i think nao looks like he could be crow and fio's kid 

(from the game "sofia?")

I played this for my YouTube channel, so if anyone's interested in checking out the video in another tab, then follow this link!

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Anyway, I just wanted to say how much I love the characters. I love how you think Siren is the yandere at the beginning, but towards the end, you realize he's just trying to resolve an unanswered problem (why Nao left). I also love how Nao isn't a traditional yandere if that makes any sense? The one that goes crazy immediately when they are left alone with the one they love. I know that was create a bigger twist and add suspense, but I really enjoyed that new type of yandere. And yeah, like most people I didn't see the ending coming :0 Towards the end I knew something was up, but a part of me still sort of thought it was Siren.

Overall this game was really interesting!!

i looked at like 2 comments before playing this and saw there was a twist, then i saw the yandere game jam and was so confused,, so imagine my shock when i saw the ending. i cant believe i still got caught off guard even though i knew there was gonna be a twist

nice game but whats with Sirens pants wasn't there anything more... fashionable?

This was cool! Loved the twist!

wow i definitely didn't expect that ending ngl i thought siren was the evil one

Made a video

Idk why but after the first cutscene and after the lights flicker my game lags a lot

great game!

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I was 5 min into the game when I noticed that the game was submitted for 'yandere' game jam and thought Siren was sus as hell. And then when Siren brought up someone specific my opinion did a 180. nice twist

good game!

(very much spoiler-ish, beware!) :  So I've finally had time to play this (had to play the web version bc it kept glitching on my pc for no apparent reason- well, I actually think I need to update my drivers so there's that-), and oh lord I loved so much the perspective thing on the bus. It wasn't really spooky but mysterious and I was on the edge of my seat waiting for a jumpscare, lol. I loved these characters, hope we can see a continuation/lore to understand more about Nao! (and his powers? what about the eating buildings thingy? and the white blob? Whatever happened to Siren? So many questions!).

Edit: I could do the Spanish translation if you'd like, I don't know if anyone's offered already but anyways I would love to help <3